Good verse i liked the content looks like i aint the only person with a negative outlook on life your from the uk too so i feel what your saying lol.
The concept was cool but nothing outstanding, i thought the vocab was nice perfect for the content of the piece youy didnt need to go over the top with it and you didnt so it was a focused piece. Your imagery was the nicest part some good emotion in there describing what you think about life and giving advice the Grabbing life by the balls line was cool made me smirk. The only thing i didnt like was the flow maybe try and add in a few multies it will add a bit more complexity to your writtens. Other than that i really liked it.
Can you return the feed on my piece its called 'Sick State' id appreciate it.