im gonna "turn u off to beefin" like "converting u to a vegetarian"
till you start "wetting urself" like "automatic filling aquariums"

^set was really played...and the punch could have been better.Seems like you rushed this IMO.

While Slic is being spoken of in the Rap Mags n Sites, without fame seeking as well//
You might JUST be lucky enough to be talked of in the…let your NAME speak for itself…!

^Stretched out,decent concept for a punch,worded bad...and Your style also seems awfully familar to fruad/icy-hot as well..

v/Past tense