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Old 11-29-05, 10:09 PM   #20
rexless
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Voted For: Street Disciple

Ima rip this fool, Motha fuckaz only thirteen...
Don't make rap your career, You'll neva make any Green...
Ima rip through your spleen, Pull out your vocal chords...
I'm like a Docter, When I go through you with this sword...
Nurse, get out the scalpel, I'm about to Operate...
Beaten pretty bad, Gonna have to amputate...
Can't Tolerate, None of your weak ass rhymes...
Get Outta the 90's brah, Get with modern times...
Jesus will live a Hundred lives, Still you ain't no disciple...
Can't rap or flow, Kid like Shaq shootin' free throws...

you have a basic flow some good rhymes and a decent apporuch but you need to get more raw like you need to attack more i think befor we can concider you part of this crew you not far but still need a bit of training and i think by battle more cats you will get what im saying to you now, decent try but attack your opponit more and diss your oppanit more nice try



Face it nigga, you ain't gotta flow, so just quit tryin to rap
Chances of you beatin me?Ha, like a nigga wit no ass takin a crap
Cus rhyme scheme is just like scarface, shits just played out and old
And ya wouldn't be spittin 'sick' even if you were rhymin with a cold
Notorious?You in the wrong place, like a cracker in black wall street
Scared, Couldn't start 'beef' even if he had a grill and some raw meet
You got no street cred, notorious my ass, nigga it's all inside of ya head
Know nothin bout the streets, got chased by a postman, claimed he was a fed
This nigg couldn't spit hot flows even if this nigga swallowed a lighter
Battlin me put you in the spotlight, no one notices cus you like u a ghost writer

i felt like you attack more at your oppnit some was basic some was ok noting good you need to attack your opponit more and get more concepts going cause all of them was either old or recycled concepts good try but i think you won this battle


take this battle as a exsample of why you need to attack more because you never know how much your opponit is going to attack and not just flow you see there is a difference and that has alot to do when someone picks who wins you wanna pick who is attack more with original concepts and not just flowing

thats why i think you won
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