I Love Wales, Thugs Fail, with their Drug Tales, im just a Lone Crook
You aint a player your bitch got more chins than a chinese Phone Book
-Nice, good flow, nice rhymes, good punchline there. Heard it a million times but good still.
My Flow Is Complex, My Ho Is On Cess, to Cope With Abortion
Gat Or Two On My Bed, Tattoo On My Head, Approach With Caution
Substances surrond my cerebral as i pen another Ill Verse
Battle me? ok but make sure you sign your fucking Will First
-Tasty tasty here. 4 nice lines. I really like the "sign your fuckin will first" -bnang on there with that. Ya flow is good again and the ryming is spot on.
Im on a quest to ask every bitch why their pussies have a Fishy Smell
Im knocking on my grandmothers door first so please Wish Me Well
Im a weed head but im handsome so i make being Stoned Look Iller
Everybody on this board better change numbers im a Phone Book Killer
-lovely metaphor, good rhymning again and nice punchline. You have serious talent for this. And your a Uk dweller too which i very much like. -pussies having a fishy smell. -dont we know it!
Just pray to god i dont find you i'll leave you in an Eternal Coma
Some say im cartoonish ok then i'll go to springfield Burgle Homer
Simpson, cause im fiending for a doughnut and a Duff Beer
But shit i got Chief Wiggum chasing me cause i Snuff Queers
-ha ha ha, loving every minute of this. Good punches here and nice use of simpsons, something everyone knows abput
Yep im sad to say it but the criminal life is the life i Gotta Live
I beat people up more often than guardiands of Foster Kids
I despise everyone of them so my family i May Slaughter Mine
Im currently pushing samurai swords through Mail Order Brides
one thing im really liking here with you is your topic range. Its different, original and amusing. Again, nice flow and rhymes
The walls that build up my patience are slowly Cracking Down
Ive never been to the Circus but i really enjoy Clapping Clowns
Listen to my songs in depth their is hardly No Jokes Mentioned
Im waiting outside the post office to rob the Old Folks Pension
-sweet as a nut here again. "enjoy clapping clown" -great metaphor, amusing, interesting. Your like a breath of fresh air.
Yep when im around any town you can watch Spitefull Actions Mount
Im irresponsible so yeah i let my kids stay at Michael Jacksons House
When im in the booth i show more rage than the Incredible Hulk
Skill like i posses is more hard to come by than Edible Cunt
-dont know wat else to say. i enjoy your consistency. No part of this has let you down, the metaphor use is good and you used that michael jackson line well.
I gotta be real i wear Shitty Draws, i do fuck Gritty Whores
Im in a Cold Jail, with No Bail i dont comply with City Laws
Im watching porn writing rhymes, shit now my Thought Lost
I just saw your mother getting her pussy ripped by Horse Cock
-ha ha, "gritty whores", "city laws" lovely. I want to hook up with you for a few collabs or something. -Definately. you got skill and i like your work.
This is the end now yes im cocky but dope i'll leave every Whore Wet
But before that ima put on fatiques and scare the shit outta War Vets
nice again, good closer, there was no topic other than self-glorifcation, altho that isnt a bad thing as i think this is your first open mic so that is usually the way. Altho most peeps's first verses are not as good as this. I can see you've obviously elvated at your game on another site but im gald your here. Cos i really want you to be in our crew, Gods Of War. -We are an up-and-comin crew who help each other out a lot and use each other to progress our skills. I want someone like you cos you can be like a secret weapon.

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