First: LMAO @ fagbag or whoever he is. What a prick, and a dumbass. Ignore that stupid shit.

Second: LoL @ you making me leave feed on this bigass piece.

Chymera, meh @ that to be honest, I mean it wasn't necassarily hard to follow but I just wasnt' feeling it. It flowed nicely, well structred, and you had good/great vocab. It also seems a little short as well.

Mentalz: Big vocab, you dick. Make me pull out my thesaurus for some of these, and I generally use nice words too. Flow was on point, and I see some internal rhyming intwined in this piece. Concept development was good, well lengthed piece, but meh @ you ending in a question. Well put though.

Props to both of you.