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Old 12-01-05, 12:31 PM   #22
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Voted For: Natural killa

i got a coupl'a issues, but none without mention'n you..
Killa who.?, man, i only fux with pussies b4 i get screwed.
decent enough, although wording cud be better..
n i should muzzel ya wackness dog, just for barking threats,
n let RV watch this killa whale
.......................... worse then depresssed water park pets,
ok wordplay, decent punch..
so NK thinks hes dope..? well yo: that aint the truth im buyin,
cuz safari's proven to be wack, even his fuckin prides lion,
LMAO!!! dope ass wordplay daz..
i mean yo, even you admit to ya excessive Blah achievements,
so after this verse NK'll be feel'n bad
................................... like aggressive spa treatments,
wordplay was aight, links are played though..
whatever you say "STOP"..! please yeild with the gay drops,
cuz this is killa's last en-counter like corpse's on display tops,
ok closer..

this verse was a little inconsistent, although that one bar was fucking amazing with the wordplay. the closer was pretty average, that bar with the link was spoiled by the link because they are played, you had a few average bars with nice enough wordplay, basically you didn't really put it all in this battle and came a little inconsistent. 5.5/10



Swears to be ill and blessed wit skills,when it's herbs sayin' this man's nice,
cuz daz don't "blow the flute",but still lost to One-Man-Band....TWICE!!
nice wordplay, decent personal..
Seeing daz stand and fight?won't happen,he'll find somewhere to hide 'n stay,
cuz when it comes to call-outs,he's "stalls" more than cars in driveways
ok wordplay, wording cud be better but nice..
Lies stay,in daz's mouth and most of the shit he spits is barely his,
he don't spit "jack",and can't "rackem",and I ain't talkin 'bout his alias
personals again, nicely done..
No matter wat the daily is,daz spits trash,see his verse?try 'n read it,
cuz I'd throw him in the "drain",if his skills weren't already dry and depleted
rhyming is off, punch is a little weak..
This guys already defeated,but won't admit it,cuz he stay on other guys,
And while Daz claims to be a vet......his verses still say otherwise
decent enough closer..

again, a little inconsistent with the punches but not as much this time. the opener was fire, i liked the personal on Daz used to good affect. you did have a weak bar in there and the closer was alright but nothing special. you threw in some wordplay which was cool and you had the personals working for you, not your best verse but i think you won this. 6/10


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