First guy.. I'm guessing is indeph.. Was pretty good man.. Work on deepening your voice a little and your raps will be gold bro.. Shit, I'd collab with ya if you get a better mic...

Other guy..
Uhh no.. I'm guessing you just started rapping... Try and make your voice sound less whiney and gay.

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RIP jono, peace out bboy.
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