Thread: Fuck JRoy!!!!!!
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Old 12-02-05, 03:55 PM   #2
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Christian Rap? How you gon consider that//
You probably ain't a real M.C. plz don't consider rap//
^..ok,worded bland.
But consider this, son my flows are limitless//
and since you so close to god...damn man invison this//
^..Good rhyming,but where is the diss?,and wtf should he invision?dumb,unthoughful bar.
At the last meal Jesus wasn't there sippin cris//
or on stage bustin rhymes screaming "I gets mines!"//
^..No rhyme..and again,no sense,so what if jesus didn't sip cris or scream on a stage?..wtf?
Please take time to stop the epidmic//
that's right i said it....Phrophecy is back and more prophectic//
^..self glory,which is ok,but..this was wack,and very unoriginal.
Your pathetic...Holy Hustla Records huh//
fubbaucubba uh...if you ain't got it yet.. nigga i'll murder ya//
^..Liked the 1st line,2nd was shit.
You're muthafuccin rediculous//
Exit stage left like Snagglepuss...cuz ya scared ta fuccin read this//
^..poor rhyming,decent punch.
Step to my block nigga i'll smack ya ass past Africa//
You'll come back lookin like Mike Tyson was jabbin ya//
^..Good,your first good bar.
I'm surprised that Christ himself hasn't upon you cast death//
and they way i'd conquer what's left...I'm like a fuccin Aztec//
^..OK,pretty decent.
Lil pussy i pray that you respond back//
How are you even black?//
^..He never said he was black.He even posted his pic in member mugshots,he's white,and open about it.
You got ripped by M.C. Firetruck...Explain that?// (No diss to firetruck)
^..This would have been good,but you said "no diss to firetruck"..meaning firetruck ain't wack.So..why would Jroy feel bad about losing to firetruck,who,in your eyes,is not wack?Makes no sense.
Can't even except a fuccin battle invite//
you the target insight//
YO ASS BOUTZ TA DIE TONIGHT!!!!!//
^..Blah,boring shit right here.

Ok..weak ass verse.Full of lines that didn't make sense and lines that were boring.Saying "yo azz boutz ta die tonight!!" is boring,gay,wack,unoriginal,played..etc.

U need work.
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