Ok,you both need to shorten up your lines,they are waay to fucking long.bad flow in this OM,
The 1st verse,not one bar that flows.Those lines were fucking long.
The 2nd verse,well..a FEW bars that flowed,but..most of that shit was stretched.

So bassically,shorten up your lines.

Content was ok,should have been better tho,considering that you stole another man's concept.