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Originally Posted by Natural killa

Ok,you both need to shorten up your lines,they are waay to fucking long.bad flow in this OM,
The 1st verse,not one bar that flows.Those lines were fucking long.
The 2nd verse,well..a FEW bars that flowed,but..most of that shit was stretched.

So bassically,shorten up your lines.

Content was ok,should have been better tho,considering that you stole another man's concept.

Noting your wack... and gave feedback about flow. God damn you are the stupidest idiot ever. I write the same on all my verses yet your the only dumbfuck to ever say shit. It isn't stretched... it's my style.

Also noting I didn't know this was going up cuz I wasn't done

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Originally Posted by SPuL

^dude it's poetic, what did you expect? He believed his ex still loved him after cheating on him with 9 guys and 1 girl.