lol i was joking he knows it we were fucking on aim and he said eh would and i was liek yea ok(cause he never drops anything) so im proud that u dropped something lol
beat is dope of course
intro idk lol you remind me of a hick when you talk lol i can jsut picture you damn willlyyyyyy go milk the cow lol
1st bar dont breath in so heavy when you start lol no ones really hear of you lol but i have i luv you no personal
2nd bar lol at scurred to get the flow nicer lol at uncle tom meh didnt hit though
3rd bar flow sounds kind of rushed cant hear most of the first line
4th lol at leaving with no tips didnt hit though
5th crack rock played dont know how u got im tom boy lol
6th trailer park no far from it lol played
7th mad played at barbie diary
7th wack no comment probably one of the3 worst
8th lol i do squirt but u ooze lol
ok chorus you should have tweeked it a little at least but work on the emotion you lacked the most on that breath control you sound like ur out of breath lol
1stummm no lol another really bad one
2nd flow sounded weird on this line herpes blister wack lol
3rd this was ur best line so far ppl did think i sounded like a little boy on the mic at first till i worked with it and improved it best line in the whole song
4th my names amanda what does that mean lol
5th flow wasnt that good on this line
6th wackest 1st line but the follower was dope
7th no hit
8th flow was kind of off bad closer
chorus sound off beat like u pasted it off a little bit?
OVERALL I HEARD 2 NICE LINES LOL WEERD EMOTION NEEDS TO BE UPPED SOME PARTS HAD BAD PRONUNCIATIONS BUT MOST WERE GOOD FLOW WAS PRETTY COOL FOR THE MOST PART OFF IN LIEK 4 PLACES
EMOTION AND PERSONALS WERE WHERE YOU LACKED PUT A SOCK OVER UR MIC LOL IT WILL HELP ADD DUBS NEXT TIME AND I WOULD HAVE ADDED AN INTRO

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