mmmm, yeah this is good, but ive noticed when you use strings you exagerate on them, like the drums on this one, you should of left the echo only for the hi hats, not the claps,as for the hook, thats not a good sound at all for it, work with the bass, like do a different melody with the bass, thats what makes a beat dope you know, so overall its ur best, just focus on the right sounds

peace