Voted For: Cash Complex

Ok

chip:

even on text, this man choke like a clone of b-rabbit,
his cash complex like his rhymes; he still don't have it,
- This is an ok personal
how does a poet kill a textcee in a battle or song?,
don't know, just read this, i'm hittin this herb like a bong,
- No, too basic, and not a good rhyme either
and best believe this clown brings no punches,
he just a actor, this just practice, i'll off him with one of my crunches,
- No, plus the flow went a bit off
i'm a soldier, used to ride with TTI,
now just for fun, i'm makin this newbie cry,
- So?
but hold on, before i get off topic,
his rhymes belong in a toilet, i guess u could say he bring that hot shit,
- No...lol...your starting to kill yourself with that line
here's some advice for next time, dont' go for the best first, cuz believe me
this battle's done like my breakast dog, over easy.....
No

Flow was off at times...not a single decent punchline, rhyming was basic most of the times....

Cash Complex -


how the fuck did u become commander-in-chief?/
i step on the flow he 'kicks' like im standin-on-sneaks/
- Not really workin...bad opener
this heat'll leave you missing like your textual record/
you go both ways in this game like sexual checkers/
- Nice set-up, but what the hell are sexual checkers? bad...
raps not your'e match, so i'll call you a genre dyke/
dissin my sigs the only way this kid's gettin on the mic/
- Doesn't really make sense...
yall may be like "this kid Cash's conceited"/
but dont blame me, its his shitty raps that pre-concieved it/
- This is ok...
hey, at least its still possible for you to win chip/
because all the votes you get dogg, they from your kinship/
- No...not workin

You had no line that really stuck out to me...it flowed well, and your rhyming was good and consistant throughout with the multis at the end

Ok, both verses were not strong in fact weak in many ways....both need to improve on the quality of punchlines especially for the future

I really could have voted either way...

But for two reasons

1) 'his rhymes belong in a toilet, i guess u could say he bring that hot shit' - this line backfired...
2) Complex having better rhyming...

I am voting for Cash Complex....

Stay Up both though