you hyped yourself sooooooooooooooooo much man all over the boards with "i can do this, i can do that.. ive done this ive done that... im dope because e.t.c"

i told you what needed improving, your delivery was fucking boring, u had charisma and presence but it lacked real variation in ur delivery, ur flow became predictable, so switch it up more n not just when a beat changes but also in the middle of a beat e.t.c............ sum of ur lines are slightly rushed, im not listening again to list the lines cos i cant be arsed and it bored me the first time, thats being fuckin honest... it is better than alot of RV material, but it is far from super duper dope like u tried to act like u are