Let me break this down. I don't see why you'd rehash Em's concept unless you put a truly unique spin on it. And, from my perspective, you didn't really do that. As it stands on its own, this is a good track. However, my mind kept reverting back to Em's Stan and I concluded this falls short of his effort. The constant letters you rapped about became repetitive. Your flow is consistent throughout though.


Good track that could have stood out more with a hyper beat, better writing of the climax, and a more creative spin on an already dope concept.


I'd rate this 7/10

no hate


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