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Old 12-05-05, 03:34 PM   #2
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Yeah!

word to the production Lmao

Flows aight in first verse u seemed to have placed it wrong i know it can be right i herd it before

hooks dope love it..gives it that spice lol

2nd verse flowss wayyyyy better

right

delvierys nice,could use a lil more though

emotions koo,ggod for this type of track

lyrics are koo Lmfao@Shared Your mama

presence is nice the way u presented yourself was fitting on this track

your voice fits it well as well

good track overall i'd give it a 8

just work on your delivery,i dunno seems a lil low

flows good wen its normal ,fuck the timing place lol

yeah as i said before PRODUCTION IS HOT lol

Well keep up

good work dq
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