Voted For: Technique

both verses are good but in different ways. rexless' has got a lot more metaphors and wordplay -a lot more but it doesnt mean all the punches are hitting as hard and you need to concentrate on that or your battle verses will get weaker. Try a few more obvious personals or something. Your verse was good tho, but wouldnt even touch a better man. It almost seemed like you were just throwing wild punches around and putting in metaphors just for the sake of it and it didnt really fit too well.

Tech your verse was good, nice punches at times but it wasnt evolved enough. No metaphors or wordplays that i saw but most of the punches were on target. Like i said tho this was very close in different ways. You need to use some more clever lines in that tech or you'll get beat by a anyone more elevated

stay up both ya'll and if any of you wanna battle hit me up on a PM or sommet

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