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Old 12-06-05, 12:22 PM   #12
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Voted For: Nick Fletcher

....You Think Ya Got Vicious Rhymes?...Ya Punches 'Cant Find Me', So I Say Ya 'Diss Is Blind'...Quit Runnin Fa Best, That Positions Mines...You Wack, Only Time RV Sees a "Delivery From Nick" Is At "Christmas Time"...
^^^ight opener way to stretched
....Watch As My Scripts Tear This Dude...Laugh At Ya Feel Of Defeat As You Sit There And Lose...Retaliation Is Futile..So I'll Critically Diss You Til "Let Is Barely Seen" Like "Strict Parent Rules"...
^^^weak werded wrong
...Why Do You Brawl Wit Tha Best?..Like "Shoutin Fa The Grim Reaper" You've Just "Called To Ya Death"...You'll Get Left Mauled Wit Tha Rest, You Can Say "My Verse Tripped You" Da Way You "Fall To My Text"...
^^^Good but wack structure
....You Think You Tha Hardest, Ya Aint Dawg...I'll Murk Any MC, Regardless Which Name Called...Fuckin Wit Punch, Watch A Part of Ya Fame Fall...Cause Im Quick Ta "Fuck Up Etch" Like "Artist Who Cant Draw"...
^^^ight closer

You wack ass gay bitch, fuck the rap game, I’m a put you out
I see you say dopeness speaks for itself huh…
..no wonder you never shut your mouth.
Good opener
I’ll fuck this kid easy, with a few near fake personals and rhymes,
Ya see whilst I may stretch the truth, he’ll just stretch his lines.
^^^good personal
Ok, so I’m dropping half-assed, but I don’t wanna rub it in his face,
Cuz his lines are so poor his verse is considered a charity case!!
^^^Hot....i liked this personal
I don’t know you PL, but your skills ain’t impressive to folk
Ya punchlines get a laugh though, cuz they’re beyond a fucking joke.
^^^Good closer

This was an ight battle onesided mostly punchs u came wit wack structure an some ur personals were weak an punchs....Nick u came wit a solid verse nuthin played had some nice personals..u get my vote....V/Nick Fletcher
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^^^RTF Honestly.........or this vote will be removed....
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