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Old 12-06-05, 01:49 PM   #1
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Originally Posted by Natural killa
Voted For: Trey MethodZ

Ok,Trey methodz got this battle.
The biggest factor in this battle was the line difference.
Gkillaz did,however,have some unoriginal shit..
For example

Your name I know why you picked it, rhymes get served like a trey...

^Quite posssibly,the most unoriginal nameplay you could use..

As for trey,my only advice would be to shorten your lines up,their a' little too long..but,you win this battle.

Vote-Trey Methodz


Just so the vote doesn't get Dq'd,I'll explain more

It aint a shocker, Trey MethodZ steals rhymes, I got my blocker....
He just sits outside my window wit a pen n pad, like a stocker...
..wtf do you mean by blocker?,and stocker?I think you mean stalker,which doesn't rhyme with blocker.
Tryna steal my balls like a soccer game, but the kid cant kick it...
Trey's No Show like a ripped ticket, gettin no where like a cricket...
..The steal balls,soccer wordplay was ok,tho a little gay..but the rest of the line was weak.
Your name I know why you picked it, rhymes get served like a trey...
The only method you know is to die slow like a flower bouquet...
..Like I said,the 1st line is as unoriginal as it gets,and punch was ok.

Im infect yah chest cavitie Wit Battered Frees X-ing Out ya anatomy
So ima Seize the fabric of yah roots
…….And Play Capture The Flag Wit ya Family
...well,a little too technical,but ok..
Ya Organs Split Open When i Carve An Slice, Forget Sharin Beef i Hog da Mic
Cuz Trey Make Sure Ya Corpse Evaporate........Immediatly like Carbon Ice
...nice rhyme,ok punch,
This fag bought a ford whip n’ now he's claimin that he's focused
This plastic Trey is spittin’ bogus Listen stop payin yah rent
....................then maybe u'll get Noticed
..umm,I don't get it dun.
Mind of a lord stabbin wit a knife n a sword cuz all his Rhymes are a bore
he’s more of a ‘dead weight(wait)’
............................than Lines For The Morgue
...sorta played.
GKillaz just entered doom.....When ill contortion Strays
floor ya brains, so watch me murder this act like abortioned plays
...ok...

so,yea...proper explamation
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