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Old 12-06-05, 02:26 PM   #64
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Voted For: Natural killa

Nick Fletcher- Your verse was pretty good, you had some enhanced punches n wordplay/personals in there. Most appealing lines was

''N’s going through a phase, saying he got girls, I’ll fucking break ya fads
Only girls shouting “Ohh Naturaall” are in fucking aromatherapy ads. *''

other than that you had some 'ok' punches n shit but nothing really that hard hitten..some here and there but nothing i havent seen before against him. ive sseen stronger from you, not what i expected.

Natural Killa- Your verse was well structured and flowed pretty good. you had consistant punches n wordplay/personals...not all were that great but the ones that stood out the most was

''Don't feel blue,cuz soon..ya inmates will rip the buttons off your chest,
"My ASS is going to prison!!" <-----see,even you know what to expect''
n
''I'll leave u seein' strife after I finish wit this 'n give ya heat wit joy,
but then again..you got more time on your hands than Rolex delivery boys''

most appealing lines..had some comedy in there which made yours more enjoyable to read.

overall dope battle ya'll.

v/Natural Killa
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