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Old 12-06-05, 04:15 PM   #9
The Frowny Guy
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From: UK, bitch
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Voted For: &lt-(>

Mad Dog's verse
All the fuckup's in Iraq was this brainless guys fault,
not hard hittin or funny
But who the fuck is called a symbol like that singer named Prince,
ok, this is ok, but the way you put your words together could be alot better
The only time this kids full force is when he's gone commando,
this sounded gay to me, mate
That ya skills are hot but their jus flat like batteries,
you're comparin his kills to batteries? wtF? no, wack
Least when i'm spittin tracks you can hear what i'm saying,
one of the best punches so far[/n]
overall, this was kind of a weak verse. your delivery made some of your lines fall short immensely.
I give this a 4/10

[b]<)-(>

You play with fire and you gon’ get burned
And omma be there with a dustpan, a broom, and a brand new urn…
this was the only punch I liked in the first part
Track one “Workin magic” …
now if ya wanna hear some wack shit
believe me when I say that’s it
lol @ this, I really liked the flow in this, too.
I woulda listened to da whole track but I dozed off
nice personal, I liked this line
Please…step ya game up…
I know you going thru “changes”
Brought my name up and now you getting’ flamed up
not a really dope punch, but the delivery alone made it tight.
And I ain’t talking ‘bout no nestles
So take them candy ass bars you spit
And save em for a textee
this was easily the best punch in the battle, I went "damn" when I heard this
overall, MD had more punches than you, but you had the delivery that really added some flare to your verse. I will give you a 6/10
my vote obviously goes to <)-(>. This battle was even from some points, but lopsided on others.
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