This piece was aight in my opinion. Nothin really special. Ive seen this type of topic done a lot so im kinda tired of it, no offense to u tho. Ur structure was ok the lines for me seemed a little bit stretch, but its all good, u might be able to say it over a beat. And ur vocab was kinda simple in a lot of places and the imagery was ok. Like i said b4 the lines seem a lil stretched so the flow was ok. I was i saw more multies in this to make it flow better and more interal rhyming. My favorite bar was:

my balance is right, my style is tight, am all in the hype
if my lips was big enough... i'll kiss all of you BITCHES GoodNight

i thought that was pretty good. Well keep it up man, and pls RTF on Runnin'. Peace.