yo thank u guys for this " crostuctive critisism" ima def work on wat i need to i got one more song i workin on and well gettin up for yall to dump on but yea def lovin the feedback guys thanx for honesty and i know exactly were i feel off
the got damn part ::"with ryhmes like yalls no wander your music is free":: sry for that but thank u guys for the help