U need a better lead in instead of just comin out of no where to start flowin


maybe some ad libs (UH, UH, YEA, UH HUH)...prepares people for ur flow


I think the HIGHS on ur vocals are too piercing...cuz ur voice is naturally piercing...

i think more lows in ur vocals wud balance that...not sure...iono


Beat is DOPE...and u need to stop using my damn CHIP MUNK!



ur flow is pretty good here


not a bad track dawg



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