Ok better than i expected, flowed nicely to point of no return imo

I can notice the road is focused on my potential
No credentials, but a man to stand who holds life’s essentials

that was cool

It’s like I’m hangin as a picture for evil to penetrate my frame

Nice

It was worded nicely too could of been worded nicer but still
Content wise was cool need some more meta's in there though
This is the sort of piece u need lines to really make the reader think


But yeah interesting read
respect


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