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Old 12-07-05, 07:14 PM   #11
Tha Q.
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very interstin delivery with the lyrics...good...

good vocab early on


ur flow needs to be tightened though...it's the weakest part of your game, IMO


the lyrics were good

flow was NOT BAD, but inconsistent and shakey


Chorus needs to be AMped


sounds pretty cool tho


did u lower ur voice on ur hook? hmmmm...


not a bad track dawg...jus elevate ur flow



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