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Old 12-08-05, 06:43 AM   #5
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Originally Posted by Dizzee Rascal
Uk stand up
Ok

Wasnt feeling this to be honest felt it could of been done so much nicer
he's like yo you got a lump?...she's like that's my clitty...
c'mon give it a licky...i know you wanna taste,


too cheesy imo

Content wise the rest was funny lol about the sit on my face bit was classic
felt could of expanded on it, def needed similes incorperated
flow was cool

respect


http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2566854

Return the feed please


ye thanks for the feed...like i said this is goin into a song so the "text flow" isn't apparant here in this OM coz it's really song lyrics...and the link ain't workin dude
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