Ok allow me to break this down.


The very beginning was not all that great in my mind until some music started coming in. Then it progressively got better.

Internmental.. your 1st verse was good, you flowed nice w/ the beat and were on point but it sounded like you were huggin the mic.. Voice was very low and loud. Although sounding like this you 2nd verse was much better. I heard a good vocabulary on it and I enjoyed it.

B. / U.N.F. - I thought you sounded great on your verse. You came in strong and w/ the beat and followed through the whole way. Your vocab could have been more colorul but what you did came together rather nice. The think i liked least about hearing you was the Hook. Just got in the way of the giirls singing. Overall good verse dude.

OVerall - I thought this piece was very enjoyable. You were both on w/ the beat and flowing nicely which is good. I cant really complain about either parts except the part about internmental sounding a little off. Otherwise 8/10.... nice shit fellas.

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