Voted For: KempoMRK

Ok

Kamze

Can't beileve this kid, steppin to battle me, he got alota heart,
I know i'm gona win, cuz it's easy to see, he don't get a MRK (mark),
- Not workin man
His rec is 1-1, he got no hope , he's just a helpless muthafucka,
And everyone know, that MRK, actually stands for mrkocksucka,
- Would be ok, but you don't spell kock with a K
His picture faded, like his dreams, of ever being something great,
His reign of success will never come,just like when he masturbates,
- No, played as fuck concept man
I wouldn't be surprised, if this bitch decied to make a no-show,
Cuz He always kills the tempo, so, he decided to name himself kempo, (kills Tempo -K-empo)
- Ok....I guess, too basic though

Flow was fine, rhyming was basic though...lines were far from great, most were not good at all...need to be more original in approach, and be more precise and effective with your punchlines

Kempo

I can tell you ain't at all gangsta, the way you living live,
Cos you ain't got a 4-4...your record just rocks a 5-5,
- Nice opener
Your verses are whack, weak and composed in the wrong manner,
As your bars are as choppy as the cut in your banner,
- Nice again....
Finest in Manchester? I guess that's true, ah yeah,
Cos I knew there was a reason that I've never been there,
- Ok
Guess you give pleasure so I'll put an O on your name you geek,
But that's kinda apt cos...It's weird how you Kamze-O weak.
- Not really workin here...

Decent verse with some good lines....flow was ok, but rhyming was basic...personal. and good disses here...good structured verse, looks like you know what to do....just keep battling and improving

Kemp took this, his verse was generally better and he was more precise with his lines in terms of attackin the opponent...Stay Up both

I need votes on my battle, would appreciate any

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