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Old 12-09-05, 01:19 PM   #5
Jae Gutta
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iight - to start off beat is cool, nice selection for a track like this.

Flow: good, coulda been better. Broke pattern a couple times in some akward places. Overall nice flow

Delivery: nice, once again I think if you added feeling to emphasize in some places it woulda given the track an extra boost.

Mic Presence: You got that on lock fam.

Hook: The screwed shit sounds hot on this beat so good choice.

Lyrics: Strong for the type of track it is.

Overall: Good shit man, like I said you broke flow in some difficult places that's about it. And Coulda did a lil more delivery wise. Good job tho fam
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