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Old 12-09-05, 03:38 PM   #13
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Voted For: Sobe.

like a buthcher i handle beef, think you can handle me,
until my boy hand me the heat, like sand in ya crack when you sittin at the beach,
...Butcher/beef shit is played;And in all of this,I have yet to see one punch.
ima get in ya ass taste that defeat, n it dont taste sweet like pussy do,
leave you wetted n leakin like pussy do, u a fag leave you in a bag like lunch for schoo, sobe it u goin 0-1
when we through.
...Well,a lot of filler,kinda weakened it.But the pussy thing was ok.

.. really kid, that says it all, this bitch is mine
& it's obvious he's a newbie.. when he can barely write 6 lines
...Decent
ya got a lotta problems, n' i'll put ya in a land of mess
cuz I'm leavin u homeless.. n' that's an issue u can't address
...Dope;liked the rhyming,
I'm the type to give hope, but still got'em fuckin scared
cuz when I raise doubt, it's only to toss him in the air
...Good

One-sided as fuck here.
Sobe got this easy..
Doubt it,for starters..you seem to be focusing too much on rhyming/flow..and almost neglecting punchlines.Out of all the shit you had,the one diss you had was calling him pussy..and that was weakened,becuz you mad filler around it.

Vote-Sobe.

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