its dope wow at the lil rhymin scheme u got goin on...but make sure ta not just have rhymin words at the end...make sure ta have another set of rhymin words inbetween then anotha set of rhymin words at the end the more diffrent sets of rhymes u put in one line the more impressive it gets...oh by the way this alpha assassin but nos banned me from the fuckin site so i had ta get a diff account...anyway ima give ur shit a 7.5/10, not cuz it was wack but cuz there wasnt that much ta read and like i said u were just rhymin words at the end..otherwise not bad