Atticus: had nice emotion, content was nice and so was structure, made it for an easy read from where your flow lagged...flow was nice though, mos def an ez read...

fav lines:
Living this drift of a life, just, kissing a knife,
slit by depression...blades lips ripping a site.
Everyday consistence dancing an instant away...
wasting in sorrow, hallow...nothing more than plain.

Ill Technique: coo wordplay, and flow was nice..content was sick, kept my interest, nice even structure as well made it an easy read

fav lines:
And My Last Seconds Set In While I'm Wreckin
Testin My Medication For Hell's Inn, Were I'm Headin
You'd Be As Mad As Me, If You Had The Key
To Open Doors To Have A Life Half As Bad As Me
^sick...feelin the hell's inn

Uzi: more poetic approach, nasty vocab, sick imagery....coo flow....and structure was sick as well

fav lines:
Darkness overlaps the sunshine from portraying its beauty
Harvest changing while obtaing my gem Like a saphire ruby
Heartless ideas are swayed by The swinging of the pendulum
Artist hypnotized by The brightness of the magnified spectrum
Mezmorised by the polygons that are falling on my conscience
^nasty enough said....

Mystic Chaos: like ur other drop, lines are long, but held an abstract flow, nice read had a load of elements in it, just need to up the rhyme scheme a tad... good shit

fav lines:
Time's not a factor, although the movement staggers at each notch.
The speed stops, slowly haulting after day breaks and the moon rises
With new surprises vastly improving on speed just what is needs
It arises to please the company of every living human being
^sick, had a nasty image appeal to it

Chymera: nice poetry approach, felt the content/imagery in this segement, went well with the others....

Fav lines:
wither in there prime, towers down...
The hourglass has now bowed over.
Over and over the past rounds closer.
The last long sands stand to form God;
as his fists twist and become the world's clock.
^loved the hourglass line...went very smoothly with the rest of your segment

MentalZ: vocab was locked down, flow was sick too....good shit

Favlines:
It wreaks from pores, engrossed readily.. steadily swaying
As The Pendulum Swings heavily across the aging painting
Staged the blaming, to denounce the compound rash tactics
So I'm constantly placing aim at the surrounding clash of fanatics
^sickkk....enough said....had the flow, and vocab to relay the topic/metaphor very appropriately


keep the collabs coming...shit was nice
stay up and keep the pens writing
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