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Old 12-10-05, 06:07 PM   #9
.Ike.
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Originally Posted by It's SPuL!
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my verse on trade it all, 3rd verse, best recent shit I did prolly.....ROLL TIDE ~_~



roll tide...word....even though they let me down the last 2 games...

ok listening to your verse...

always liked this beat....u sound like senser at the lil intro to your voice...


flow is pretty good....but i think you gotta work on the way you deliver your words some...like your saying the words...but im not believing what your saying...if that makes any sense...

your pronunciation isnt terrible...dont get me wrong...but a few words here and there are hard to understand...so id work a bit on clearing up all the words....

lyrically its ok...nothing insanely special...but some decent multies...

other than that...its straight...

flow is good...but try to make things about it stick out...your on beat and everything...and its straight...but it doesnt keep my attention througout the whole verse...


word..
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