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Old 12-10-05, 06:11 PM   #10
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Originally Posted by Invektive
listening...

ehh beat is gay...

lol @ spend too much time on internet.....ok?.....your voice...u need to work on...it kinda sounds like u have spit build up in your mouth...just work on pronouncing shit more clear...and your voice will be straight....

flow is ok....

lyrics are straight....

quality is complete ass....spend some of your money on a new set up instead of all the gear u talk about lol....

u def. got potential...but it all comes with time...and theres some things u need to work on.....touch up flow a lil....it starts getting a bit choppy towards the end....
your voice like i was talking about....pronouncing words clearer....

copy and paste this reply in the thread in the songs forum
lol
please!?
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If you do kegel excercises, you would be able to do something similar without having to hold your tip shut with your hand. After you've been doing them, hold off ejaculating as long as you can to really let the pressure build and then aim for your girlfriend's eye and let 'er rip.. You might get lucky and shoot her eye out. That's probably exaggerating it a bit, but it will still be hilarious
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