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intro is shitty lol...u sound too "white" id say....its just kinda corny.....

yea quality...is like...insanely horrid....

your flow...you definitely need to work on...its ok for starters...but it falls off too much to be considered a decent flow....youll get better with that though...

beats coo....

you punch in too much also.....its annoying...learn your verse...then spit it...so it all comes out in 1 take....i dont let myself record a song if i cant spit the verses in 1 take....trust me...it helps...make yourself do it...


lyrics are good....

delivery and presence...theyre ok....your mic takes away a lot from presence cause its soo shitty...so i cant really really break down on that....delivery though...mean what u say...and make your listens believe it....say your words in a way thats gonna come across on the track...and make someone say "damn i see what hes saying"....

best thing u can do is keep recording and keep recording......

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