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Old 12-10-05, 06:22 PM   #15
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Originally Posted by Invektive
listening to b boy stance....


lyrics at the beginning are just straight up wack man...theres no other words.....

they get better throughout the verse though...its just the first few bars....

take that fucking echo off...jesus christ...that shit is annoying..

presence is def. there lol.....voice is coo...flow is ok...a couple spots where it could be touched up........

other than those few lyrics...this is ok.....some of the lines were funny...

quality is ok......

this song was decently done...but it wasnt real catchy of anything...nothing id listen to more than once....try to make your flow a lil more catchy for the listeners....and your delivery too....id almost say tone down your voice a lil bit...your like screaming into the mic lol.....

thats all...



yeah, fo that track my lyrics were really loud. if u listend 2 tha fresh prince 1 its how i usually am, werd
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