This was a historical piece.

Literally lol

You stuck on topic the whole way which was impressive.

You had good imagery and kept to the concept well.
I love how you used enhanced vocab but not to much so the flow was choppy.

Nice emotion and facts for this topic. Deff one to remember man
overall 8/10 keep ya shit up.

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