*gets done listening to black magik - loving you...which only i can hear..considering i mixed it for him...and he loves me so he sends me his tracks that he doesnt post on soundclick....*


ok enough of that

listening to Creeping....

hook is dope...dude singning is ill....and beat is ill as well...

"rapping my butt off".....uhh no dude....just no....

voice is cool....flow is pretty good.....but man...lyrics...you gotta work on that shit.....you use like 0 multies...no wordplay...metaphors...anything...just use some multies here and there or something....

i have always thought u had mad potential....cause...you gotta good voice..good flow ( but you DO have to make sure u dont screw up on it at all...if u mess up a lil bit....re record that shit...cause a couple spots on here..u screwed up)....your hooks are done well...pretty catchy....you have good song making ability...which you cannot say for a lot of internet heads....but dude...lyrically your killing me...just switch it up some and give me some multies here and there...

delivery and presence are good....convincing....your flow falls off when u say rapping my butt off....which is the line that stands out in the track...and makes me not wannna listen to the rest of it....but i did....and its a pretty good track...minus that 1 wack ass line...

but thing u gotta work on is those lyrics man.......just put some time into it...and work on that shit....

word

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