Listening through who cares what. it's sharp. that's all you need to know

This beat is ehhh a little too redundant for me, and I think it's too HiFi for your vocals. The volumes are about even, but it makes your voice sound flat and muffled, just liek your mic does. You need a pop filter, and to EQ your highs up more to open up the sound because your sound quality on this is about 20-30% short of what it could be. The lyrics are good, but the flow's off some times. Not fucked up, just that you don't roll with the momentum that you start some times so it makes the flow sound long or off, liek how Nas sometimes sounds. Like instead of lockin the flow up on x amount of lines in a row, you'll spit it one way on one line, then like 1 sylable too long on the next. Like you'll put a sylable in that'd break up a multi - put it that way. Your mic presense is "fair" over all, but this aint' exactly the track you steal on. I think you could be a pretty well rounded emcee once you get that flow locked in. That's about my 3¢

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