is the beginning of this the hook?

I couldn't tell. If it is the hook, then it needs to be distingushed more from the verse.


I think you have a good flow. BUt, to be honest with you, it's starting to get boring to me. One way to add variety to your flow is to be more creative with rhyming and/or delivery.



Not bad...but nothing special.


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