All these Dead Presidents
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This piece is better than your other piece but once again, nothing amazing. Your vocab is still nothing jaw dropping. Your emotion is there but nothing too amazing. It was heart-felt which is key, and your structure was much better than other poem.
Overall about a 5/10 , better than other piece though.
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