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Originally Posted by Cho-Kahn MiWang

maby u checked the wrong song cuz.....

"cool yo,nah it's "dope" bro, <-----you're replacing slang with slang?? HOW IS THIS A SLANG SONG!!
like herion ?,nah it's "Her-on" <--actual slang.
ya mean on ya head man, <--no slang.
nah,on ya arm son" <--no slang.
wait ya loosin me <--no slang.
ha' i bounced on ya" <--no slang.
so wut u sayin yo" <--no slang.

you got a car n shit
nah i "push a whip u bitch" <--wow. cutting edge slang that still sounds like exactly what it is. Braggo.

u got a "girl",nah but my "bitch" is chill <---STILL sounds like braggo.

thats for the "birds",this dick is <--STIIIILLLLLLLLLLLLLLL sounds liek braggo.
thats sick shit....

it was jus put as 2 ppl talkin to each other...idk <--how? it's you on one verse talking to your self.

bla....im not typing it all out...but if u listen,ur wrong man

read my feedbakc, how could I have possibly checked the wrong song??? listen man, your song didn't sound like it was saying SHIT about slang. look at the edit toyour quote. it was a busted track. stop trying to defend a busted track, and suck it up and get over it and do better the next time. That's not hard is it? Your song didn't interpret anything that you wanted it to. Notice there's no feedback in here, but it's been here for mad long? Who else said anything about it, a dude you already know?? That's a sign that people didn't like it or connect to it.

But hell...what do I know about music.