That high pitched voice shit at the intro is WIGGEDY. people stopped pumpin that high pitch shit since like 2003.

This beat is iconic, so you really better kill this one.

Your mic has a MEAN buzz on it, but it's actually clear otherwise. Your flow got better, but its still off. the lyrics hold up no prob, but damn, that's enough of this. I turned it off ,and here's why: the flow is 1syl which is for the 80's get with the times. This soudns liek you didn't write it over a beat and the flow was WAY too lumpy. To be honest, for what this beat is and what it means to my generation, this is almost a disgrace to Wu. The good new is that you got much better since the last trakc I heard from you where you were just talking over the beat at your own pace, but the bad news is that, on the real, this track is dookie because of the flow, the 1syl rhymescheme, and that occasional buzz on the mic. Your hook should have had SLIGHTLY more reverb put to it and another layer ov vocals under it so it didn't sound like it was all one continual spit. Also, you need to learn to swith up your flow and change your momentum, because all your tracks deliver the exact same, like Triple N. You also spit from end to end on both tracks, there's no breaks, no change of pace, no moment for a listeners mind to catch a breath, etc, liek you'll go right out of the last word on the 16th bar immediately into the first word of the hook, then after the last word of the hook, immediately into the first word of the next verse, and so on. Like John LEgend says - take it slooowww-owww. oh oohh oooohhh. Next time DQ..take it slow.

Real feed as always, because I'm tired of seeing people sugar coat shit. Either that or they dont' have any idea what the hell they're leaving feed about.

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