listening through my usual Audio Technicas.

Who ever's up first, on that mic, they sound muffled as FUCK. beats' hot, nice sample usage, and props for who ever produced it and not doing the generic move of making the sample a wack 2003 highpitched voice.

Phen, you need to EQ the highs on your vocals to open em up because they're muffled to hell. The lyrics are nice, liek the funeral line, the donald trump line, etc. Your flow went rushed on a line or three. You need another layer and SLIGHTLY more reverb to make your hook come out. Either that or you just rhymed through the hook.

Second verse's review is the same as the first. There's some clicking noise or something that soudns like mic handling noise in the back ground. Or liek you're typing or something. Pretty good track, but it sounds jew'd out on the fidelity. Yeah, I said it. Jew'd out. Why you skimping on the fidelity? that's the #1 way to rape your track into a position of "okay" whne it coulda been "good". Just makes the music sound cheap. etc etc yadda yadda yadda 1

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