Voted For: Ysdat

Dopium
well first of all, your not good at topicals at all. you have no sense of emotion or flow to write such a image. you are prob better at disses and shit but like man your grammar and spelling is so horrible. and thats a bad thing because I didn't understand any of it really. the flow and imagery were not connecting at all. you need to get creative and use metas a bit and slip words more.

Ysdat
not bad man, the flow and imagery is very creative and the storyline was kept strong throughout the whole writtin. the grammar and spelling is way better then his and you even wrote more then he did. with a lil hook type thing in there as well. so overall Ima give it to you for straight up showin up with a poetical skill at least.

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