lmfao Daubs is right im gon need lazer eye surgery after readin this shit...but ur ight..u gotta stop forcin u were focusin on makin it complex too hard to the point where it didnt really make that much sense..."Yes,Stephz "Line-Rhymez-Wrecks-Theses-Frees",But Yall Like Some Dumb "Blind-Kinds,...Rejects-To-See"//"
lol that proves my point...just work on ur storytellin and drop that bold unbold shit u got on...lol thats a lil annoying...but overall not too bad for bein only ur 3rd post