Short piece but it was nice. Kept to the point never really strayed, the vocab seemed aight for this piece. The flow was nice and the structure was fine. My favorite line was:

Wondering When I'ma See The End Of My Hardships
Ahhh Shitt, Life Got Me Going Thru Hard Shit
Fridge Ain Been Filled Since I Moved In My Apartment
That Ain't Rockin My Boat Tho, I Got A Hard Ship

^^I thought thats was real nice. I just liked the wording and emotion in it. Overall this was an aight piece nothing really special I'd give it an 7.5/10. Stay up man. And please RTF on Runnin' the link's in my sig. Peace.