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I'm feelin the vibe of this track...real mature style
flow is good...and ur delivery fits the track
if there's any down to it, I'd say throw more surprises in the delivery or rhyming...I guess you don't have to, but it's make it interesting all the way through...At worse, this was consistent...at best, it was nice...so, either way, it's a good track
also...think of ways to distinguish ur hook from ur verse
otherwise...good piece dawg
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