Thread: Diss To Lexikon
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Old 12-13-05, 07:39 PM   #3
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[QUOTE=lumberjack]DISS TO LEXIKON

You just a sad misled fake with a bad headache like boxers
After a fight you can’t master write face a knock you out
...in the first line,so what if he's got a bad headache?How is it an insult to say someone has a headache?
With this block clout a lightweight can’t type straight no doubt
For you to rhyme its action at law no satisfaction all flaw
...Block clout?Makes no sense.
Your girl became a fatal attraction when I hit the draws raw
Girl juice flow in spurts you know it hurt to find out the truth
...Hmm,this was decent.IT's just you should have said something else instead of "she became a fatal attraction".
Your bed fine like red wine anyway it happened under your roof
Best think in order then drink some water and cool off get proof
..No diss.And wtf u compliment his bed in a verse for..?
Before stepping to this, try to have a different character and be
Magnificent in America or your jewels a get rocked G
...Good
Look you mixed tape has a fixed shape and the junk don’t sell
The funk won’t swell on the beat so yo chumps don’t excel
...Focused too much on rhyming,ended up sounding weird.
Hell you fell like Humpty Dumpty just an egg head failure
With paraphernalia
..Humpty Dumpty?...

Ok,your problem,as always..is focusing too much on rhyming.Making your shit sound werid...
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